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advanced creative writing.

"i read your poem and it sucks."

"at least i can spell!"
i yelled back.

"i tried reading your poem
but every other word was blotted out by tears.
try not crying every time youre writing."

"at least im not confusing your and youre.
at least i know the difference between their there and theyre.
at least im trying when im crying."
i sobbed in response.

"i read your poem but
im still not impressed.
your tits are too small
to fill out that dress."

"well every time you cum
it would be better as a comma."
i whispered under my breath.

but the last thing i remember you saying is

"alison,
why dont you put down that pen
and stick to picking up the bottle again?"